This is a really cool concept which holds both a creative taste and movement. Im not too sure on the layout of the simple background and simple text and typography, needs more of a creative taste within the background, kind of falls short to me. Could be a concept to develop off.
“ And then I laugh, because it's so ridiculous and so gorgeous and it's all I an do to not melt into a fit of giggles. So what if I'm ninety-three? So what if I'm ancient and cranky and my body's a wreck? If they're willing to accept me and my guilty conscience, why the hell shouldn't I run away with the circus? It's like Charlie told the cop. For this old man, this IS home.” ― Sara Gruen