"Georgia is a truly diverse state. With mountains, ocean front, rural communities, and a sprawling metropolis, this state seems to have it all. It often flies under the radar, but you won’t find a more pleasant place. In Georgia, even the air smells like peaches."
Hmmm... I'd recommend writing an outline that develops your thesis, not just 14 ideas that support a thesis, but other than that. Very interesting way to estimate how much you need to write to reach a page requirement.