Art Critique - The technical execution is superb, however the problems with proportion are rather glaring. Shoulders far too small, and there is no muscle at all where the triceps should be The upper leg is WAY too long, since her knees should come to where her chin is. This gives the appearance of an anorexic woman with ridiculously long legs. Her tiny torso doesn't go with her too large head and too long legs. I recommend doing life studies of women to correct the proportional issues.
What the last one lacked in composition, this one made up for it. I love all the different positions of the shoes and the attention to detail in the laces. The depth this piece has also makes it a success.