The linework in this provides a great sense of direction and the different tones set the mood. I like the POV shots and the wide shots that set the location. Great detail on the faces too to convey emotion.
Griz and Norm Tuesday Tips - Head Framing (in storyboarding) Clarity is key when dealing with the head, especially the eyes when storyboarding. More to come on eye direction and framing (staging) in general.